I'm rereading to remind myself of story now that it's finished.
“Because I’m still trying to wrap my head around the idea that you actually think you can trust this character.” Lovely. I can see Xander saying this.
I also like the flashback. Actually I like it so much I almost with you'd started with it, but the start with Jenny and Giles does set up that second (flashback) scene quite well.
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Date: 2016-08-31 03:00 pm (UTC)“Because I’m still trying to wrap my head around the idea that you actually think you can trust this character.” Lovely. I can see Xander saying this.
I also like the flashback. Actually I like it so much I almost with you'd started with it, but the start with Jenny and Giles does set up that second (flashback) scene quite well.