Great story, very well fleshed. You have a precise way of writing, detailed and analytical. The characters, as you've written them are, I think, very true to the timeline and their interaction very canon. Spike had only begun his journey and was still quite evil and resentful. I love that little glimpse offered when he asked why Cordelia hated him, of both of them. This is truly fleshing characters.
The revelation of the reason the amulet was needed was well done. Such a Cordelia action, to care, to accept her apparent demise but still do what she could to save those she cared for. Now I want to know how Lilah got it, :D.
The original story was a good read and here, you've taken it and made it your own while remaining true to the remix philosophy.
The final paragraphs - so Cordy! Serves the smug idiot right and a perfect response from him!
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Date: 2014-12-21 09:34 pm (UTC)The revelation of the reason the amulet was needed was well done. Such a Cordelia action, to care, to accept her apparent demise but still do what she could to save those she cared for. Now I want to know how Lilah got it, :D.
The original story was a good read and here, you've taken it and made it your own while remaining true to the remix philosophy.
The final paragraphs - so Cordy! Serves the smug idiot right and a perfect response from him!
Your last line is perfect! Thanks for sharing.