Nicely done having the bag ladies be the society women. So given this is the summer Buffy becomes Anne and goes to the hell dimension, I'm guessing that's what happened to our victims?
Your OC continues to intrigue me with her insights and her capability. The sparring with Giles is beautifully done.
Lots of lovely lines in this chapter, but this one in particular jumped out at me "not just news but data that hadn’t yet been formed into news" That was a lovely nuance that I really appreciated.
I'll be off to chapter 3 once some chores are out of the way!
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Date: 2014-08-02 07:40 pm (UTC)Nicely done having the bag ladies be the society women. So given this is the summer Buffy becomes Anne and goes to the hell dimension, I'm guessing that's what happened to our victims?
Your OC continues to intrigue me with her insights and her capability. The sparring with Giles is beautifully done.
Lots of lovely lines in this chapter, but this one in particular jumped out at me "not just news but data that hadn’t yet been formed into news" That was a lovely nuance that I really appreciated.
I'll be off to chapter 3 once some chores are out of the way!