Date: 2014-02-15 05:43 am (UTC)
I dearly love Father Nolan. There's something wonderful about these characters who know and help in their own way without being the big, flashy hero. His advice was spot on and I loved how Mary Claire was relieved she got him, someone who might understand.

A very interesting dilemna you posed for Buffy. Because Mary Claire fainted she was able to break her word and kill Jerri. I must admit, this was a twist I didn't see coming and truly appreciated for its logic and imagination. I have to wonder, is the deal Jerri refers to that she heard about the one Buffy made with Spike in S2?

As always your description was evocative and your story engaging. I'm very glad you are still writing.
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