I found this through your end of year meme and... wow. Connor is, admittedly, a character of whom I am not terribly fond, but you render him very intriguingly here. His detachment and focus are compelling and the build to what his own insights hint at as inevitable is deftly rendered. Excellent work!
In conclusion, I have to agree with you - this story is greatly under-appreciated and deserves a lot more acclaim.
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Date: 2013-01-03 06:18 am (UTC)In conclusion, I have to agree with you - this story is greatly under-appreciated and deserves a lot more acclaim.
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