Date: 2006-03-01 11:56 pm (UTC)
I'm not one hundred percent with you on your Harmony voice, a few things don't really feel very Harmony like to me, but other than that?

Gold! Absolute gold. You should bottle your inspiration and sell it, I don't think you're capable of writing an "usual" story, not even if you were activelly trying to do it.

And the first part of my comment on the Harmony voice is assuming we're talking Earth-prime :) Harmony, which, this being you, isn't a sure bet.
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