I’m happy to see that you like it. And since the point of the story was basically the interaction between the two guys — although, being me, I couldn’t help amping up the original narrative with some action — I’m pleased that you approve of the conclusions I had Angel draw in the aftermath of that interaction.

As far as posting in gen_storyteller, I’m checking it out. While I definitely am inclined toward the idea, it may take me awhile to translate that into commitment. Still, I’m looking.